Could you please check the word choice? Thank you very much.
1) Mary admits that she has always fancied Ian. Ian started chatting her up at Jessie's party. However, another girl turned up and Ian had a row with her.
2) At first, Mary didn't realize that the two of them were going out together.
3) Then, the girl dumped him right there and Ian came back to her. She was so disappointed (by his behaviour) that
she ignored him and went away.
4) The singer regrets having left the apartment. On that day he should have stayed in and watched TV.
5) If he had run back for the phone, he wouldn't be in this mess right now.
He also regrets not having left all his cash home and taken a credit card instead.
6) At the end of the song he implores the robbers not to take all his money (away) Or rob (?)
7)I can't rephrase the sentence: "It shouldn't've clicked when indecision reared its question mark." Before that Grace Jones says that his car couldn't get started on that day.
See your earlier post for #s 1 - 3.
4. OK
5. OK
6. comma needed; ... not to rob him.
7. I don't understand the reference here: "It shouldn't've clicked ..." Please explain.
Before that, Grace Jones says that he couldn't get his car started on that day.
1) Mary confesses that she has always had a romantic interest in Ian. Ian initiated a conversation with her at Jessie's party. However, their interaction was interrupted when another girl arrived and Ian got into a heated argument with her.
2) Initially, Mary was unaware that Ian and the other girl were in a relationship.
3) Subsequently, the girl ended her relationship with Ian on the spot, and he returned to Mary. However, Mary was so disappointed by his behavior that she ignored him and left.
4) The singer regrets leaving the apartment. He believes that on that specific day, he should have stayed indoors and watched TV instead.
5) If the singer had quickly returned to get the phone, he wouldn't be in his current predicament. He also regrets not leaving all his cash at home and opting for a credit card instead.
6) Towards the end of the song, the singer earnestly implores the robbers to refrain from taking away all his money, or to not rob him altogether.
7) It is difficult to rephrase the sentence: "It shouldn't've clicked when indecision reared its question mark." Grace Jones mentions earlier that his car couldn't start on that day.