Posted by Anonymous on Wednesday, October 12, 2011 at 8:25pm.
Those are all very good. I assume you're referring to World War I.
http://www.indiana.edu/~wts/pamphlets/thesis_statement.shtml
Yes I am. Ok thank you for that site, what exactly do I need to improve on the thesis statement I wrote?
I sort of reworded the question and made it into a thesis statement covering the main ideas.
Also could you please give me links to other sites, that tells you about the life of an average canadian soldier during the great war.
There is also a good book-Generals Die in Bed by Charles Yale Harrison if you want a realistic viewpoint from the soldiers in the trenches (This was based from his experiences in the war)
Ok. Thanks Brian for your help:)
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