Posted by Anonymous on Tuesday, October 11, 2011 at 6:59pm.
Study these definitions.
http://definitions.dictionary.net/revision
the changing of the content and organizing it in order to communicate the writers topic.
does this sound ok?
No.
You have one group of words that is not a sentence.
Revision is the changing and organizing of the contents in order to communicate the writers topic.
O.k. Be sure to make it WRITER'S with an apostrophe.
thank you very much
You're very welcome.
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