posted by Henry2 on .
I forgot to add a few more sentences.
I hope you can check them, too.
1) According to Wordsworth imagination sharpened a special intuition, which enabled the poet to perceive and see things the ordinary man is (or was??) usually blind to.
2) The bird never sang with a voice so thrilling (or with such a thrilling voice).
3) The colonists refused to pay taxes without being represented in the English Parliament. King George III sent troops to put down the rebellion.
1. PLEASE learn to use commas after introductory phrases/clauses. If your readers have to read everything twice or more to "get" your meaning, you'll lose them.
perceive and see = redundant; delete one of these verbs
2. ... such a thrilling...