I urgently need you to check this paragraph.I'm unsure about the use of phrasal verbs. Thank you.
1) Maggie and Fred met each other at a wedding party and hit it off immediately.
2) Maggie fell head over heels for Fred. He, in his turn, fitted in very well with her friends and they all got along with him.
3) Soon Fred asked her out on a date. When they had been going out with each other for two months, they fell out over something really stupid. She had thought she had seen him chatting up another girl.
4) She got so jealous and they ended up falling out for over a week. They made up a week later and paired off after a dance at a friend’s party. The next morning they decided to run off to Rome together and get married.
5) Now they have settled down with four children.
Maggie still gets embarrassed about the fights she had with Fred and her friends will never let her live it down.
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2) Maggie fell head over heels for Fred. He, in his turn, fit in very well with her friends, and they all got along with him.
3) Soon Fred asked her out on a date. When they had been going out with each other for two months, they fell out over something really stupid. She thought she had seen him chatting up another girl.
4) She was jealous, and they ended up falling out for over a week. They made up a week later and paired off after a dance at a friend’s party. The next morning, they decided to run off to Rome together and get married.
5) Now they have settled down with four children. Maggie still is embarrassed about the fights she had with Fred, and her friends will never let her live it down.