posted by Henry2 on .
I urgently need to check these sentences. I did the corrections myself. I just want to know if my corrections are OK.
1) A smaller stage, called inner stage, was hidden by a curtain at the bottom of the main stage and was used, for example, for the Juliet's tomb scene.
A further stage, the upper stage was situated over the others and was used as a balcony or by musicians.
Correction: A smaller stage, called inner stage, was hidden by a curtain and was located at the bottom of the apron stage. This stage was used for smaller scenes such as Juliet's tomb.
The upper stage was situated over the back of the apron stage and was used ...
Women were not allowed to play so me .
... called an inner stage ...
The last sentence is unfinished???