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Homework Help: 9th writing

Posted by alarih on Thursday, October 6, 2011 at 5:06pm.

Can you add figurative or tell me where I could add it, check my title, proofread, and help me show creativity?

Freedom Doesnít Come Free
What is something you can never show much gratitude for? Well, veterans have done many things for our country. Freedom is a debt that can never be repaid that veterans have done for country.
One reason I said they fought for freedom was because they wanted everyone to be treated the same and fought for those rights. Even though it was hard, they tried and tried until some of those veterans couldnít any more. Many people donít even think twice about why we honor Veteranís Day on November 11. Some people donít feel the need to celebrate certain holidays, especially this one, if it doesnít pertain to them. I think Veteranís Day is a wonderful holiday to celebrate because many people lost their loved ones trying to help us. However, not many people care about veterans, but I do. Freedom symbolizes our countryís flag. Freedom is a mighty word that affects everyone who wants their rights to be recognized. I can surely recall the time I went on a field trip to Baton Rouge. We had gone inside this building and they were honoring Veterans on that day. They had many photos of excellent human beings that served us. Freedom is real and not a joke, people. Itís time to stop what youíre doing and say a few words to the living or deceased veterans and thank them. Veterans are someone we canít stop showing faith and love too. We are going to make a difference too! ďAll the great things are simple, and many can be expressed in a single word: freedom, justice, honor, duty, merciful, and hope,Ē a quote once said by Winston Churchill. ďMy country tis of thee, sweet land of liberty, of thee I sing. Land where my fathers died! Land of the Pilgrim's pride! From every mountain side, let freedom ring!Ē Thatís the song that comes to mind when I hear the words veterans and patriots, because it captures vivid pictures of veterans fighting and protecting us. As you can see, veterans are what freedom is all about.
In conclusion, freedom is real because itís a debt that can never be repaid by our veterans. Veterans donít come around too much, so get to know about some of the veterans and thank them on this Veteranís Day on November 11. What do you think?

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