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Homework Help: english

Posted by Sheryl on Saturday, October 1, 2011 at 2:24pm.

I have to give the following feedback to this paragraph: (Evaluative, Interpretive, Supportive, Probing and Understanding). I don't know how to start or if I have to use all the 5 types of feedback. This is the paragraph I have to read and give feedback on:

The fear of using computer stems from several reasons. Most people don't understand exactly how computers work. This lack of understanding will create tension and ultimately lead to fear. The constantly changing computer technology causes computer users to continually learn and adapt new skill sets. Most people feel overwhelmed because knowledge they learned once now isn't enough-tomorrow’s knowledge may be different and may even require "unlearning" how to perform once-proficient tasks. Additionally, workers are afraid of being replaced by a computer. Less and less human intervention does indeed push many workers out of their jobs. People not only wonder if they have a job or not; they don't know if they could find a job if out of work. Fear of computer is primarily fear of the unknown.

This is my feedback not sure if it's right or not: The writer has a good start. However, I feel there could have been more information supporting the why people don't understand computer; whey they are fearful of learning new technology.

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