posted by Anonymous on .
no accsuly i ha ve to correct these
A 2008 study suggested that happiness can be spread “like a germ through social networks of friends and family” (Graham 1)
You might believe that your loving husband or wife, your doting progeny, and your intimate associates create your happiness. It may be that something else is going on: their intimate associates might be having an effect on you, too (Graham).
the two u posted in that earlier post is my corrections that i made :)
i hate this lesson lol
Both of those are incomplete. The words are fine and the spaces are fine, but punctuation is not fine.
Be sure to use quotation marks to indicate which words are copied verbatim from the source. All the words outside the quotation marks need to be YOUR words, even if the ideas come from the source you're citing.
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