Posted by Henry2 on Wednesday, September 28, 2011 at 5:30pm.
witches'
tell (simpler than "prophesy"; delete "to") -- or find a way to use "foretell"
delete words in parentheses
use "will" instead of "can/shall"
check all spelling
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