Please check my work. I have no one here to help thank you.

9. Explain what techniques you would use to present your ideas on this topic and persuade others effectively.
If I were to represent any ideas in the argument, I would consider using persuasiveness consistently. I would use terms that put a mental picture into the minds of my audience, so that they will truly understand the big picture. I would also consider my word choices to be effective by using frame words. Presenting ideas in to the advantage is relevant, this will consist of proper tone used. I would provide facts that include supporting evidence to my argument so that the audience may find my research legit. Also I would use basic logic, and figures to show that my point is correct within the topic.

Identify three approaches you will use to apply these techniques to effective writing and speaking skills. The first approach I would use is starting with my audience whether speaking or writing. I would first begin by implementing a plan, as I conduct my research. Using terms and images to persuade them, and preparing my self for any objectives that may follow. When using figures I would consider using illustrations, anecdotes, and statistics, as well as any research that has been proven with evidence. The second approach I would revise or proof, preparing my argument for my readers or audience. I would revise the words I used to make sure they are appropriate for my audience as well as persuasive. The third approach I would use is providing all of my references to support the facts in my argument.

The content of what you've written in both paragraphs is good.

Be sure to go through and correct all run-ons.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm

Also be sure to check every word to be certain there are no slang words in there.

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Based on your description, it seems like you have a good understanding of the techniques you would use to present your ideas and persuade others effectively. However, without the actual content of your work, it is difficult to provide specific feedback. Nonetheless, here are three approaches you can apply to effectively write and speak:

1. Audience Analysis: Start by understanding your audience's needs, interests, and beliefs. Tailor your message to resonate with their values and address their concerns. This requires conducting thorough research about your audience's demographics, background, and preferences. By doing so, you can use language, examples, and visuals that will connect with them effectively.

2. Craft a Strong Argument: Ensure that your ideas are well-supported and credible. Back up your claims with evidence, such as facts, research studies, expert opinions, and statistics. This will make your argument more persuasive and increase your credibility. Presenting your ideas clearly and logically will help your audience understand the reasoning behind your perspective.

3. Effective Communication: Pay attention to your tone and word choices. Use persuasive language that paints a vivid picture and evokes emotions. Frame your message in a way that highlights the advantages of your proposal or viewpoint. Additionally, consider using storytelling techniques, such as anecdotes or case studies, to make your ideas relatable and memorable. Revising and proofreading your work will ensure that your message is clear, concise, and free of errors.

Remember, effective persuasion involves understanding your audience, presenting a strong argument, and communicating your ideas clearly and convincingly.