Homework Help: English

Posted by Henry2 on Thursday, September 22, 2011 at 5:16pm.

Could you please check these sentences, please? Thank you

I've got short, wavy, dyed blond hair.
I've got a round face, heavy eyebrows, oval eyes, a large mouth and a small nose. I'm friendly and sensitive. I'm quite serious and clever. I'ma bit shy but I'm generous.
I'm pale-skinned and short-sighted.
(pale-skinned is the same as of fair complexion?)

English - Writeacher, Thursday, September 22, 2011 at 5:23pm
All are fine, and yes ... pale ... and fair ... mean about the same thing.
English - Steve, Friday, September 23, 2011 at 11:02am
I'm a bit shy, but I'm generous.
Compound sentences usually use a comma to separate the clauses.

Other than that, lose the "I've got" construction; "I have" is better, IMHO.

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