posted by Henry2 .
I'm posting you the ones I found most difficult to check. Thank you.
1)I hate doing shopping (“the shopping”?). I attended the primary and middle schools in Italy. I’ve got a pimply face with a pimply nose and a normal (?) mouth.
2) I’ve got small brown eyes like a Chinese with brown eyebrows. I do some football (better I play football).
3) I like reading war and car books (better: war books and car magazines) and collecting model cars.
4) I dress normal. Better: I wear casual/plain clothes. I live in the country. In the front of my house there is a courtyard with many flowers and trees. I have 4 goldfish.
4) I dress normally. (The Adverb answers "how do you dress?" rather than the adjective.
The rest is AOK.