Homework Help: 11french

Posted by rebecca on Monday, September 19, 2011 at 8:03pm.

can someone proof read my paragraph?
Salut tout le monde! Je m'appelle Olivier et j'ai ne au Congo en Afrique. Je suiss venu en Canada quand j'ai ete sept ans pour echapper les confits politiques et pour trouver le paix. Le langue officiel au Congo est le francais et c'est pour cette raison qui je parle le francais. J'espere que les etudiants canadien comprend l'importance de la liberte et de la paix et qu'ils se rendent compte de l'importance de la demicratie. Je suis tres chanceuse d'etre canadien et de partager ce message avec vu.

I didn't put in any of the accents, but theyre in my book, i just didn't feel like putting them all in. thanks for the help!

11french - SraJMcGin, Monday, September 19, 2011 at 8:37pm
Review the verbs that require être au passé composé

je suis né...Je suis venu au Canada..quand j'avais (age with l'imparfait) échapper (accent) la paix (fem)

La langue officielle...c'est le français...que je parle français.

J'espère (requires the Subjonctif) que les étudiants canadiens comprennent...liberté...démocratie

J'ai de la chance d'être canadienne more idiomatic) (you are female, right?)...avec vous.

Shame shame! I will not accept that you "didn't feel like putting them all in!" It is incorrect to write a French word, requiring an accent, without it! Ordinarily I won't correct anything without them!

If you have time, feel free to repost with all the corrections for a final proofreading. Just because it's oral, still spell everything correctly, with the correct gender. If you require a good dictionary, there are some online. Just ask!

Sra (aka Mme)
11french - Rebecca, Monday, September 19, 2011 at 9:44pm
Merci beaucoup :)

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