Posted by Henry2 on Thursday, September 15, 2011 at 5:23pm.
1. OK
2. I'm not sure you can rephrase that. It's an accepted term:
http://politicalscience.socialsciencedictionary.com/Article_056_%5BDivine_Right_of_Sovereignty%5D
3. delete "on" and insert "about"
"pursuit of pleasure"
4. comma needed
5. Are you sure about the word "moral"? Was he saying that as people grow old, they behave more and more in immoral ways???
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