I urgently need you to check these descriptions I wrote myself, mailny grammar and word choice. Thank you.
1)Photo A shows people in a business environment. There three women and a man sitting at a desk while another man is standing. This is writing something on a notebook.
2) He may be explaining the features of a new product or of a new advertising campaign. In the background there is a clock hanging on the wall.
3) Photo C shows Elizabeth I carried in (on?) an open, decorated litter and taken in procession through the streets of London with a sea of gentlemen-at-arms about her. I think it portrays the day of her coronation.
4) The Queen is wearing a chemise, a corset and black and white gown decorated with all kind of jewels. White and black were the Queen’s favourite colours as they symbolized and purity.
5) Clothes were an important status symbol to the Elizabethans, and a person had to dress according to their social status.
1)Photo A shows people in a business environment. There are three women and a man sitting at a desk while another man is standing. This man is writing something on a notebook.
2) He may be explaining the features of a new product or of a new advertising campaign. In the background, there is a clock hanging on the wall.
3) Photo C shows Elizabeth I in an open, decorated carriage in procession through the streets of London with a sea of gentlemen-at-arms about her. I think it portrays the day of her coronation.
(She was probably in a carriage, not a litter. Wasn't it pulled by horses?)
4) The Queen is wearing a chemise, a corset, and black and white gown decorated with all kinds of jewels. White and black were the Queen’s favourite colours as they symbolized and purity.
5) Clothes were an important status symbol to the Elizabethans, and a person had to dress according to his or her social status.
Be sure to check everything VERY CAREFULLY. I made corrections in each sentence.
Sure! I can help you check your descriptions. Here are some grammar and word choice suggestions:
1) Photo A shows people in a business environment. There are three women and a man sitting at a desk, while another man is standing and writing something in a notebook.
2) He may be explaining the features of a new product or a new advertising campaign. In the background, there is a clock hanging on the wall.
3) Photo C shows Queen Elizabeth I being carried in an open, decorated litter and taken in a procession through the streets of London, with a sea of gentlemen-at-arms surrounding her. I believe it portrays the day of her coronation.
4) The Queen is wearing a chemise, a corset, and a black and white gown decorated with all kinds of jewels. White and black were the Queen's favorite colors as they symbolized and purity.
5) Clothes were important status symbols to the Elizabethans, and individuals had to dress according to their social status.
These are just a few minor corrections. However, if you would like a more detailed analysis, I recommend using online grammar checking tools or having someone proofread your descriptions for you.