I realized I sent you the same sentences twice. Here are my corrections.
1)Arthur said that the Graal was where Christ’s blood was kept after Christ had been crucified. Two knights soon declared they were prepared to look for the Grail for one year and one day.
2) In 537 Arthur had to go to distant lands to fight. He asked a knight named Mordred to rule his land until he returned. Arthur trusted Mordred because he knew he was a loyal man. However, Mordred told everyone that Arthur had been killed in the war, in France.
3) When King Arthur heard the news, he got furious and fought a long battle against Mordred.
4) Though King Arthur managed to kill Mordred with his spear, he was in turn mortally wounded by Mordred’s sword, which went through Arthur’s helmet and hit Arthur’s head.
5) When Arthur was on the point of dying, he called Sir Bedivere and ordered him to bring his sword Excalibur back to the Lady of the Lake. 6) As requested, Sir Bedivere went to the lake and threw the sword far into the water.
7)On Sir Bedivere’s return, Arthur thanked him and asked to be carried to the lake. Sir Bedivere obeyed and put him in a boat.
8) Though his servant tried to dissuade him from leaving, Arthur replied that he was going to Avalon because his life was near the end.
1. Grail (not Graal); " ... for a year and a day."
2. Add one comma; delete one comma.
3. Use "became" rather than "got."
4. OK
5. Delete "on the point of"
6 - 8. OK
1) Arthur said that the Holy Grail was believed to be the vessel that held Christ's blood after his crucifixion. Two knights stepped forward, volunteering to embark on a quest to find the Grail for a specific duration of time, one year and one day. To find more information about the legend of the Holy Grail, you can refer to historical texts, literary works, or religious scriptures.
2) In the year 537, Arthur found himself having to leave his homeland to engage in a distant battle. In his absence, he entrusted the responsibility of ruling his land to a knight named Mordred. Arthur believed he could rely on Mordred due to his unwavering loyalty. Unfortunately, Mordred used this opportunity to spread false news about Arthur's demise, claiming that Arthur had been killed during the war in France. To learn more about King Arthur's reign and stories surrounding Sir Mordred, you might want to explore ancient texts, folklore, or Arthurian legends.
3) When King Arthur received word of Mordred's treachery, he was consumed with anger and engaged in a lengthy battle against him. The details of this battle, including its duration and location, may be further elucidated through historical accounts, tales, or research on Arthurian legends.
4) Despite Arthur's triumph in defeating Mordred by piercing him with his spear, he suffered a gravely inflicted injury from Mordred's sword. The sword pierced through Arthur's helmet, striking his head and resulting in a mortal wound. You can gain more insights into this crucial event by referring to different sources such as historical documents, Arthurian legends, or medieval literature.
5) As Arthur neared his death, he called upon Sir Bedivere and entrusted him with the task of returning his sword, Excalibur, to the Lady of the Lake. To understand the significance of Sir Bedivere and the Lady of the Lake in Arthurian legends, you can delve into ancient myths, Arthurian literature, or historical writings.
6) Following Arthur's instructions, Sir Bedivere ventured to the lake where he cast Excalibur deep into its waters. Expanding your knowledge about the legend behind Excalibur and its connection to the Lady of the Lake can be achieved by studying various Arthurian sources, mythological texts, or literary works.
7) Once Sir Bedivere returned to Arthur's side, he completed his task and received gratitude from the dying king. Arthur then requested to be carried to the lake. Sir Bedivere followed Arthur's commands and placed him inside a boat. To uncover more details about this poignant moment in Arthurian lore, you may consult historical records, literary accounts, or scholarly interpretations.
8) Despite the efforts of his servant to dissuade him from leaving, Arthur persisted in his decision to proceed to Avalon, as he believed his life was coming to an end. Avalon holds significant symbolism and importance in Arthurian legends and the Arthurian mythos, and further understanding can be gained through researching different interpretations, mystical texts, or Arthurian literature.