February 20, 2017

Homework Help: English

Posted by Susanne on Saturday, September 3, 2011 at 1:31pm.

Hi I have an assignment in English. I am suppose to write a paragraph.
"You've applied for a specific job in your field of study. The Human Resources Department arranges an interview and tells you to bring with you a polished piece of writing for them to evaluate your writing skills. The paragraph must describe one particular experience you've had that inspired you or guided you to choose the type of position for which you applied. Your audience is your potential employer and your purpose is to show you have thought carefully about what and/or who has motivated you toward this career choice and why. In addition you want to convey your enthusiasm for this position as it relates to your inspiring experience. Take time to think about what your audience wants to know and strive to reach a balance between formal and informal business writing.

This is what I wrote:

During my online research, I was very excited to learn about the current opening for a medical coding position in your organization. I feel my qualifications and your requirements are a good match. I have been very interested in medical coding since my father's illness. I was always interested in what the doctors had written down in my father's medical records. This curiousity stayed with me, and I thought what if the doctor entered the wrong information which would lead to one thing after another. For instance the wrong coding would lead to the wrong insurance billing. The Insurance then may not pay for the doctors visit or hospital stay. The people it would affect would be the doctors, insurance and the patient. My mind would just be racing with ideas and mistakes that could happen which led me to take courses on medical coding. I now want to pursue a career in medical coding. I want to use my knowledge and skills to the best of my ability. I want to be the person who helps enter the information correctly and hopefully help others by doing so.

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