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Homework Help: english

Posted by yesudas on Thursday, September 1, 2011 at 6:46pm.

can you please help me make this paragraph sound a little bit better. thanks!!!im taking about how power from fame and wealth make celebrites think like thir god. this eventually distrys them, or their carrer.

Celebrities are viewed top priority in todayís society, so if they do anything outside Hollywood it becomes immediate news. Celebrities canít go anywhere an ordinary person can go to without being bombarded with camera flashes and autograph followers. They canít live life enjoyably, and are depressed. This publicity outrage is also what causes celebrities like Charlie Sheen, Arnold Schwarzenegger, and P Diddy to think that they are unstoppable. Charlie sheen and Arnold Schwarzenegger were a big influence to the American culture. While Charlie sheen in his shows is seen as a womaniser and Arnold Schwarzenegger was viewed as a body building legend. However, they both end up cheating on their wives. As a result, Sheen and Schwarzenegger both lost their popularity. Eventhough P diddy is viwed to be one of the biggest artist in show busness, he is sued for shooting over the paringlot. They all in common use their powers to be self-destructive.

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