ms. sue pls. help me urgent
posted by jessie .
pls help me if my english is correct in grammar or relevant to the question thank you.
question..1.What is meant by “if we are to improve our speaking skills, we must first become more aware of ourselves, our motivation, behavior patterns, and likely our mistakes” Kindly rationalize your thoughts through your personal experience.
Improving speaking skills is everybody's doubt but, its also desire to covey message to everyone fluently and smoothly. Based on my experienced I spoke on the front of the huge audience but at first I feel really nervous or reluctant to express my thought in front of them that I might be wrong or giving incorrect information to them. I know the audience expecting more about me on what everybody can do or to learn themselves. after the meeting I remember and realized that something got wrong on my message to them and I also knew it and noticed through their reaction. I continued to speak in front of them and just think that nothing has happened on what I have said. I always think positive that I am always right what I am doing in speaking but later I have to accept what has wrong I made and it’s just a part of everyone’s life and it’s the reason to start myself aware and carefully thought before if anything needed be started specially in public speaking. Mistakes is motivating myself in pursuing to becoming good speaker enough.
To have a good skills enough in speaking. The audience comments is the one can help giving more comfortable that someone has noticed my mistakes and that is I have to give more paying attention in improving more. I should have been more understanding and accepting all what I have done wrong in my speaking in order that I can make good enough in correcting and it would make me more aware before starting to speak so I can create good words and speak well and deliver an almost perfect message to the audience.
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Improving speaking skills is everybody's goal but, its also desire to convey messages to everyone fluently and smoothly. Based on my experiences, I spoke in front of the huge audience. At first I felt really nervous or reluctant to express my thought in front of them that I might be wrong or giving incorrect information to them. I know the audience expected more from me on what everybody can do or learn themselves. After the meeting I remembered and realized that something was wrong with my message to them and noticed their reaction. I continued to speak in front of them. . . . I always think positive and believe that I am always right . . . but later I have to accept what is wrong. . . . It’s just a part of everyone’s life and it’s the reason to become aware and carefully think before if I say anything. . . . Mistakes are motivating me to becomegood speaker.
Correction: The last line should be:
to become a good speaker.
mistakes motivate me to become a good speaker