Homework Help: college writing

Posted by Tanieka Birden on Friday, August 12, 2011 at 9:17pm.

Instructions: revise to remove fragnments and/or parallelism errors.

?1. I like basebal because it is fun and teaches me about the sport.

college writing - Writeacher, Friday, August 12, 2011 at 9:39pm
Circular thinking here = "I like baseball because it [baseball] ... teaches me about [baseball]."

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I see no parallel construction problems nor any fragment, but I do see that error in thinking.

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