Posted by pria on Friday, August 12, 2011 at 4:12pm.
Thus, we believe that humans have their limitations; time will always be the strongest opponent of all human beings.
"mortal human beings" = repetitive/redundant
I would need to see the entire paragraph into which you want to put this sentence. This sentence alone seems awfully vague.
This is why history repeats itself, pharaohs from Egypt built statue about themselves like Ozymandias, but it never lasts. The American government may be attending it final duration in the near future because of the credit crisis. Thus, we conceptualize that humans have their limitations; time will always be the superior opponent to all mortal human beings.
This is how history repeats itself. Pharaohs in Egypt, such as Ozymandias, built statues of themselves, but these statues don't last forever. In the same way, the American government may be entering its final phase in the near future because of the financial crisis. Humans have their limitations; time will always be the strongest opponent of all human beings.
Compare VERY carefully to catch all the large and small corrections I made.
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