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Homework Help: english

Posted by Denise on Tuesday, August 2, 2011 at 5:19pm.

Can you please tell me if the sentence in quotation marks is the topic sentence? I read paragraph one and paragraph three, I believe that paragraph one was a very effective paragraph. "It touches a few very interesting points about why someone should create a Living Will". It explains in detail that everyone needs a Will and why. This is especially important to me because of the way that my family has handled our loved ones personal things after they have passed away. I personally think that the writer could have smoothed their sentences out more this particular paragraph is a bit choppy and all over the place.

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