February 20, 2017

Homework Help: english

Posted by lizzie on Monday, July 18, 2011 at 8:44pm.

I needed to change my thesis statement(last sentence). It was too long. Please review.

Imagine being 6’3” in the eighth grade and everyone in the school making comments about your height. There are definitely advantages and disadvantages to being tall. My best friend’s mother sent me a quote written by Bill Walton that read:”Hey, this is me; I’m this way and I’m going to make the best of my life and I’m not going to let other people’s hang-ups about me restrict my life.” It was at this time that I began to rethink why I had such a lack of confidence about my size. The social awkwardness that I endured in elementary school, which made me so very self-conscious and insecure because of being so much taller than everyone else, changed once I entered high school. The advantage of my height has led to basketball scholarship offers pouring in, giving me a free education.

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