Posted by Sabrina on .
I want to know can I write about myself in a self reflective essay ,,here is my thesis statement do you think it is ok?
In this paper I will argue the life of a child being born in a divorced family was it easier or was it very hard?
self reflective essay -
You MUST write about your own thoughts -- it's a self-reflective essay, after all!
Follow all directions in BOTH of those linked articles above.
You have written a question, not a thesis statement, and it doesn't make complete sense. Were you born before or after your parents divorced? Notice that it's the PARENTS who divorce, not the children or the whole family, but all end up living in those circumstances.
Try something like this, or rephrase it:
I did not like growing up as the child of divorced parents.