English 101AYR has now been in session for four weeks. In at least one full screen (one paragraph rather than an essay), answer the following question: Has your opinion about hybrid courses changed from day one to today? If yes, in what ways has it changed? If no, why has it not changed. Explain your opinion in essay format (state the topic and your opinion in the first sentence of your paragraph; then support your first sentence with your details and examples). Also, check each sentence for correct sentence structure especially when combining ideas into one long sentence. Keep in mind to only combine 2 simple sentences [subject + verb + completer (any words after the verb to complete the idea)].

After posting your paragraph, reply to one person's posting. Agree or disagree with the person's posting. Be sure to explain why you agree or disagree.

no i expect that hybrid courses are fast paced. but i feel the course is rushed because it is summer semester. the grammar online exercises really help me alot in improving my writing skills. after 5 weeks, i still have many mistakes on my writing . i really improve my writing, i learned how to use commas write and writing a good introduction. im glad that i tool this course because it really help me to improve my writing in just a short time.

If this is the paragraph you intend to submit, check capitalization, punctuation especially.

No, my opinion about hybrid courses has not changed from day one. (When you answer the question, keep in mind that the reader only sees your answer and doesn't know what the question refers to.)

I expect hybrid courses are fast paced, but I feel the course is rushed because it is summer semester.
The online grammar exercises really help (present or past tense?) me a lot in improving my writing skills. After five weeks, I still have many mistakes in my writing but I really improved using commas and writing a good introduction.

(It was suggested using complex sentences by combining 2 simple sentences, so it's a good idea to do that to show you have understood and learned.)

I'm glad I took this course, because it really helped me to improve my writing in just a short time.

(Past tense is far better because now you have finished the course?)

Sra

Noob -- when I read your essay, I thought you were not serious. How can you claim to have learned anything about grammar when you didn't use punctuation or capitalization?

It was suggested using complex sentences by combining 2 simple sentences, so it's a good idea to do that to show you have understood and learned.)

what do you mean by this?

no the class is not finish yet, this is only for midterm

to mis sue

i have a bad teacher. i learned just a little. i want to put what i really want to say but no because i will fail :)

No matter how bad your teacher is, you can still use appropriate capitalization and punctuation!

ok here's the final product that im going to post. critique please

No, my opinion about hybrid courses has not changed from day one. I already expected hybrid courses are fast pace, but I feel the course is rushed because it is summer semester. The online grammar exercises really helped me a lot in improving my writing skills. After five weeks, I still have many mistakes on my grammar and punctuation but that can't be learned in just 5 weeks. Also,I noticed that i improved on writing a good introduction and learned how to support topic sentence in detailed manner. I'm glad I took this course, because it really helped me to improve my writing in just a short time.

No, my opinion about hybrid courses has not changed from day one. I already expected hybrid courses are fast paced, but I feel the course is rushed because it is summer semester. The online grammar exercises really helped me a lot in improving my writing skills. After five weeks, I still have many mistakes in my grammar and punctuation<~~add comma but that can't be learned in just 5 weeks. Also,I noticed that i<~~?? improved in writing a good introduction and learned how to support a topic sentence in a detailed manner. I'm glad I took this course,<~~delete comma because it really helped me to improve my writing in just a short time.

thanks writeteacher

what do you think of the idea? is it vague?

No, I think it's fine. You are pointing out the positives and the negatives, and there's nothing wrong with that.

=)

No, my opinion about hybrid courses has not changed from day one to today. I still believe that hybrid courses provide a unique and valuable learning experience. The combination of online modules and in-person classes allows for flexibility and self-paced learning, while still providing opportunities for face-to-face interaction and discussion. One of the main reasons why my opinion has not changed is because I appreciate the convenience of being able to access course materials and lectures online at any time. This flexibility has allowed me to balance my other commitments and responsibilities more effectively. Additionally, the online components of the course have provided me with a wealth of resources and supplementary materials that have enhanced my understanding of the subject matter. Overall, I believe that hybrid courses offer a well-rounded and comprehensive approach to learning, and I am grateful for the opportunity to be part of one.