Homework Help: English

Posted by Henry2 on Wednesday, July 6, 2011 at 3:40pm.

Can you please check grammar and punctuation mistakes? Thank you

1) When did the persecution of the Jews (the Jewish people) begin?
It began on April 1, 1993, when the Nazis organized a boycott of all Jewish-run businesses.
2) When were the Nuremberg Laws issued and what did they state?
They were issued in September 1935 and they excluded Jews from public life.
3) In particular, they contained a law, which stripped German Jews of their citizenship . Another law prohibited marriages as well as extramarital sex between Germans and Jews. Some of the laws banned Jews from civil service jobs.
4)Jewish doctors were prevented from working on anyone other than Jewish patients.
5)During the night of ninth and tenth of November 1938, Nazis organized a pogrom against Jews in Austria and Germany, which became known as the night of the broken glass.
6)The Nazis started pillaging and burning synagogues, breaking windows of Jewish-owned shops and looting them.
Approximately 30,000 Jews were arrested, and sent to concentration camps.
7) After the beginning of World War Two, Nazis began ordering Jews to wear a yellow Star of David on their clothing, so that they could be easily recognized and targeted.

English - Writeacher, Wednesday, July 6, 2011 at 3:46pm
1) When did the persecution of the Jews begin?
It began on April 1, 1993, when the Nazis organized a boycott of all Jewish-run businesses.

2) When were the Nuremberg Laws issued, and what did they state?
They were issued in September, 1935, and they excluded Jews from public life.

3) In particular, they contained a lawhich stripped German Jews of their citizenship. Another law prohibited marriages, as well as extramarital sex, between Germans and Jews. Some of the laws banned Jews from civil service jobs.

4) OK

5)During the night of ninth and tenth of November, 1938, Nazis organized a pogrom against Jews in Austria and Germany, which became known as the night of the broken glass.

6)The Nazis started pillaging and burning synagogues, as well as breaking windows of Jewish-owned shops and looting them.
Approximately 30,000 Jews were arrested and sent to concentration camps.

7) After the beginning of World War Two, Nazis began ordering Jews to wear a yellow Star of David on their clothing, so that they could be easily recognized and targeted.

Very good -- there are just a few things I added/corrected. Not many.

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