Can you please check these expressions? It's really urgent. The first set of expressions concerns husehold chores whereas the others refer to what you have to do when you do the washing.
1) I have to clean the bathtub, the sink and the toilet, dry the dishes
dust the furniture, feed my family pets
put (or take) the rubbish out, take the dog for a walk, sweep and mop the floors.
2) I have to take the bed sheets off the bed, wash them and put new sheets on the bed, tidy up my room, wipe counters , stove top , table and cupboards, polish my shoes and polish the furniture up
3) When I do the washing, first I sort the clothes and put them into the washing machine. Then I select the washing program and I start it.
4) When the washing is finished, I take the clothes out, hang them on the clothes line, pin them up. When they are dry, I take them down, fold them and iron them.
1) I have to clean the bathtub, sink, and toilet, dry the dishes,
dust the furniture, feed my family pets,
take the rubbish out, take the dog for a walk, and sweep and mop the floors.
TWO WORDS REMOVED; MANY COMMAS ADDED.
2) I have to take the sheets off the bed, wash them and put new sheets on the bed; tidy up my room; polish my shoes; clean the counters, stove top, table, and cupboards; and polish the furniture.
SOME WORDING, USE OF COMMAS AND SEMICOLONS IN A SERIES:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/semicolon.htm
[SEE THE FIRST EXAMPLE.]
3) When I do the washing, first I sort the clothes and put them into the washing machine. Then I select the washing program and start it.
4) When the washing is finished, I take the clothes out, hang them on the clothes line, and pin them up. When they are dry, I take them down, fold them, and iron them.
COMMAS
Sure, let's check these expressions one by one:
1) I have to clean the bathtub, the sink and the toilet, dry the dishes, dust the furniture, feed my family pets, put (or take) the rubbish out, take the dog for a walk, sweep and mop the floors.
To check these expressions, you need to verify if each action is related to household chores. For example, cleaning the bathtub, sink, and toilet, drying the dishes, and dusting the furniture are common household chores. Feeding family pets, putting or taking the rubbish out, taking the dog for a walk, and sweeping and mopping the floors are also tasks associated with household chores.
2) I have to take the bed sheets off the bed, wash them and put new sheets on the bed, tidy up my room, wipe counters, stove top, table and cupboards, polish my shoes and polish the furniture up.
To check these expressions, you need to ensure that each action is related to tasks done while doing the washing. Taking the bed sheets off the bed, washing them, and putting new sheets on the bed are tasks related to washing bedding. Tidying up the room, wiping counters, stove top, table, and cupboards are general household cleaning tasks. Polishing shoes and furniture might not necessarily be associated with washing clothes, but they can be considered part of overall household chores.
3) When I do the washing, first I sort the clothes and put them into the washing machine. Then I select the washing program and I start it.
To check this expression, you need to verify if each action is related to the process of doing the washing. Sorting clothes and putting them into the washing machine is a typical step in doing the laundry. Selecting the washing program and starting it are also essential steps to wash the clothes effectively.
4) When the washing is finished, I take the clothes out, hang them on the clothesline, pin them up. When they are dry, I take them down, fold them, and iron them.
To check this expression, you need to confirm if each action is part of the process after the washing is finished. Taking the clothes out of the washing machine, hanging them on the clothesline, and pinning them up are steps associated with air-drying the clothes. Taking them down, folding them, and ironing them are additional steps to complete the process.
After checking these expressions, it seems that they are all related to household chores and the tasks involved in washing clothes.