posted by Henry2 on .
I forgot to include these statements about a letter of inquiry to a hotel.
Which connectors shall I use to include my queries to the hotel?
4) I'd like to know the following things: First, if the bus line in front of the hotel goes directly to the city centre; second, if there are othe children aged between six and ten with whom my child can play ball games outside the hotel; third, if your hotel organises swimming courses for children; finally, if your hotel organises trips to the main attractions. I'd be grateful to you if you could e-mail me the list of the trips organized by your hotel as well as the week's entertainment program you have planned for the children (??)
Delete "aged" -- also delete "the" just before "children" at the end.