Homework Help: writing

Posted by Ruth on Friday, June 10, 2011 at 12:02pm.

They emphasized the importance of good maternal and child health care, including the administering of vaccines.
what correction should be made to this sentence?
1) replace they with it
2) change emphasized to emphasize
3) change the spelling of importance to importants
4)insert a comma after importance
5) remove the comma after care

writing - Ms. Sue, Friday, June 10, 2011 at 12:07pm
To what does "they" refer?
writing - Ruth, Friday, June 10, 2011 at 12:09pm
Physicians and health workers.
writing - Ms. Sue, Friday, June 10, 2011 at 12:14pm
Then probably the best answer is 2), although it's not clear because we don't see the context of this sentence.
writing - Ruth, Friday, June 10, 2011 at 12:20pm
Physicians and health workers in the field also teach the public about health and hygiene. They emphasized the importance of good maternal and child health care, including the administering of vaccines.
writing - Ms. Sue, Friday, June 10, 2011 at 12:29pm
Ahh! Thank you. Now the sentence makes more sense.

The answer is 2.
writing - Ruth, Friday, June 10, 2011 at 12:32pm
thank you :D
writing - Ms. Sue, Friday, June 10, 2011 at 12:34pm
You're welcome.

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