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Homework Help: English

Posted by Chris Chance on Monday, June 6, 2011 at 5:13pm.

Hello I am in 4th grade and i have wrote this poem:

i am waiting for the rain from such a Long time
this heatness is suffocating Air conditionar has just became the prime
Opening the windows and everywhere is the grime
Feel's like I am in a desert
Will it ever rain or it will stay forever hazard?
Time has passed and not a single wave of air
It should rain as now weather is slightly fair
hours passed but nothing happened
as i can see out the window Heat rays are killing me
it surely is a droght it surely is a drought

please check it and add more wording and make it perfect :)

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