my prof said that I used next I will discuss way too much so now i'm thinking of other things to say other than discuss but I can't think of anything. this is when im stating my arguments in my introduction.
essay writing - Ms. Sue, Monday, June 6, 2011 at 1:16pm
Cross out all of your words that say, "next I will discuss." What do you have left? Make these positive statements.
essay writing - Lena, Monday, June 6, 2011 at 1:17pm
Oh, I never thought of that. Thanks a bunch!
essay writing - Ms. Sue, Monday, June 6, 2011 at 1:25pm