Homework Help: English

Posted by Henry1 on Tuesday, May 31, 2011 at 6:36pm.

Can you please check this short letter of enquiry, please?

1) My husband and I are looking for a double room plus an extra bed for my six-year-old child for 14 nights from 4 July to 18 July.
2) In particular, we would like to know your rates in half board (breakfast/dinner) for the said period.
3) Moreover, I would like to know if there is a bowling alley or mini golf facilities near Your hotel.
4) How far is Your hotel from the city centre? Does Your hotel offer a kids' club? How old must the children be to join it?
5) I'm looking forward to receiving your prompt reply.

English - Writeacher, Tuesday, May 31, 2011 at 6:41pm
1. OK

2. Different countries/cultures may have different terminology. I've never heard "half board" in the US. Is this for the UK?

3. lower-case y on "your"

4. again -- lower-case y on "your" -- twice

5. OK

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