Posted by diana on Wednesday, May 25, 2011 at 6:03pm.
It's very awkwardly phrased. Try this:
It's very important to put commas in a sentence where they are needed so readers are not confused.
You need a comma after needed.
how about
John went to the store, then called Kristy.
That's a run-on sentence. How do you think you can fix it?
john went to the store, then when he got home, he called Kristy.
Nope.
John went to the store, and then called Kristy.
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