Posted by Heather on Wednesday, May 25, 2011 at 12:49pm.
This is fine -- except you have a sentence fragment.
The last sentence has a pronoun-antecedent error.
By the way, there are germs everywhere, even a few in a sterile operating room.
ok so is that what they are looking for?
Yes.
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