Posted by Henry1 on Monday, May 23, 2011 at 5:40pm.
1. OK
2. OK if you put a comma after "1948."
3. comma needed - otherwise, OK.
4. You should omit the word "namely" since the colon tells the reader that a list of specifics is next. Put the list into the sentence and separate the parts of the list with semicolons.
Nice job!
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