posted by Leslie on .
1. Her husband, a kind, quiet gentleman, worked for HHS's public relations department.
2. Her husband, a kind quiet gentleman, worked for HHSs public relations department.
choose the sentence that is written and punctuated correctly.
50 - 50 I choose #1. flows better.
A rough rule-of-thumb when you have two adjectives together: Put a comma between them if you could also use "and" between them.