please correct any grammetical errors/tense errors and explain in order to improve my writing.
Sara came to Hyderabad airport by flight. Then, she reached Begumpet by auto where she is received by john and escorted her up to the Greenvalley Apartment. After some time,John guided her to the venue, The Arcans restaurant, where the marriage function is being organized.
Sara came to Hyderabad airport by flight. Then she reached Begumpet by auto where she was received by John, who escorted her up to the Greenvalley Apartment. After some time, John guided her to the Arcans Restaurant where the wedding was going to be held.
Read and compare carefully. Let me know if there are corrections you don't understand.
Sara came to Hyderabad Airport by flight. Then, she reached Begumpet by auto; where she is received by John and escorted her up to the Greenvalley Apartment. After some time, John guided her to the venue, 'The Arcans Restaurant', where the marriage function id being organized.
Sorry, Veronica. There are still several errors in what you wrote ... and you added some new ones!
Sara arrived at Hyderabad airport by flight. Afterwards, she took an auto to Begumpet, where John received her and escorted her to Greenvalley Apartment. After some time, John guided her to the venue, The Arcans restaurant, where the marriage function is being organized.
Explanation:
1. Use of Past Tense: The verb "came" should be changed to "arrived" as it indicates a completed action in the past.
2. Use of Prepositions: Instead of saying "by auto where she is received by John," it is more appropriate to say "to Begumpet, where John received her." This provides clarity and shows the sequence of events.
3. Consistency in Tense: The verb "escorted" should be in the past tense to match the previous sentences that describe past actions. Thus, "escorted" should be changed to "escorted."
4. Use of Proper Nouns: "Greenvalley Apartment" should be capitalized as it is a specific name.
5. Clarity in Sentence Structure: To improve clarity, it is better to say "Afterwards" instead of "After some time" to show the connection between the previous actions.
6. Use of Present Progressive Tense: The phrase "where the marriage function is being organized" is written in the present progressive tense, indicating an ongoing action. It is more appropriate to use the simple present tense for future events. Therefore, "is being organized" should be changed to "will be organized."