Posted by Kay on Thursday, April 28, 2011 at 7:47pm.
What do YOU want to say about that book?
Your thesis statement must include factual information (which you already have) plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your paper. (If your statement is simply factual, then there's nothing to prove!)
http://blog.eduify.com/index.php/2009/06/21/5-tips-on-how-to-write-a-strong-thesis-statement/
Read carefully and follow ALL directions.
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into real thesis statements.
I have thesis statement but I just need two topic sentences. My thesis is " Suzanne Collins uses her novel, The Hunger Games to show that reality Tv has a negative impact on society. "
That's not a thesis statement. It's all fact and no position. I can tell you didn't read the linked webpages I included above.
Please read everything I posted above and the two linked webpages. Then revise your statement.
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