Posted by Viola on Thursday, April 28, 2011 at 3:41pm.
Neither!
This would contribute greatly to successful customer advice about footwear.
(but I really don't like that much either)
This would contribute greatly to successful advice about footwear for customers.
Make sure it's ABSOLUTELY CLEAR what "This" is referring to.
NOTE: "advice" (there is no plural form of this word)
thank you ;)
You're welcome.
Also, make sure you use proper capitalization and punctuation when you write -- you can use that awful, no-capitals stuff when texting and IMing or whatever with your friends, but to be taken seriously for academic purposes, practice correctness.
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