posted by Viola on .
would i say: this would greatly contribute to successful customer advices on footwear.
this would greatly contribute to successful advices to customers on footwear.
This would contribute greatly to successful customer advice about footwear.
(but I really don't like that much either)
This would contribute greatly to successful advice about footwear for customers.
Make sure it's ABSOLUTELY CLEAR what "This" is referring to.
NOTE: "advice" (there is no plural form of this word)
thank you ;)
Also, make sure you use proper capitalization and punctuation when you write -- you can use that awful, no-capitals stuff when texting and IMing or whatever with your friends, but to be taken seriously for academic purposes, practice correctness.