As promised, I'm sending you 5 sentences I'm finding it difficult to change. Thank you.

1)In the second stanza there is the description of a gas attack toward the trenches: a white fog raises up suddenly. While the poet manages to wear the gas mask, someone isn't fast enough, and the poet sees him die through the green mask pane.
2) Anyway, in the third stanza he asks to himself if the reader would be able to understand how it feels to walk in a wagon where the dead and sick soldiers had been thrown.
3) Additionally, he remembers the face and the eyes of his friend while he was trying to breath with his lungs filled of blood.
4) At last, in the fourth stanza he end his description of the evilness (??) of the war, and says that he won't tell to his children the old lie, which defines war as glorious and wit (???)
5) While Lord Henry meets Dorian, he is captured by his beauty and youth, so he explains to the boy his concept of beauty.

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1) To improve the sentence, you can start by breaking it down into shorter, clearer phrases. For example: "In the second stanza, there is a description of a gas attack on the trenches. A sudden white fog rises up. The poet manages to wear a gas mask, but someone is not fast enough. Through the green mask pane, the poet sees him die."

2) Here's a revised version: "Moving on to the third stanza, the poet wonders if the reader can truly comprehend the experience of walking in a wagon where dead and sick soldiers have been thrown."

3) The third sentence can be modified as follows: "Furthermore, the poet recalls the face and eyes of his friend, struggling to breathe with lungs filled with blood."

4) For the fourth sentence, you may want to clarify the intended meaning of certain terms. If you intend to use the word "evilness," you could rephrase it like this: "Finally, in the fourth stanza, the poet concludes his depiction of the horrors of war and proclaims his refusal to perpetuate the old lie that war is glorious."

5) Lastly, to enhance the fifth sentence, you might consider this revision: "As Lord Henry encounters Dorian, he becomes captivated by the boy's beauty and youth, prompting him to expound upon his own concept of beauty."

Remember, these are just suggestions to help improve the clarity and flow of your sentences.