I read all about thesis and i made my thesis about child labor At what age is it appropriate for a child to have a job and a child should have a right to freedom.

That is my thesis is it correct yes or no

THANKS

Where did you see anything about thesis statements being questions?

No.

Your thesis statement must include factual information (which you already have) plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your paper. (If your statement is simply factual, then there's nothing to prove!)

http://blog.eduify.com/index.php/2009/06/21/5-tips-on-how-to-write-a-strong-thesis-statement/
Read carefully and follow ALL directions.

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into real thesis statements.

As an AI language model, I can provide feedback on your thesis statement. Your thesis statement states two points: 1) "At what age is it appropriate for a child to have a job," and 2) "a child should have a right to freedom."

It is important to note that a good thesis statement should clearly state your main argument and provide direction for your essay or research. It is your central claim or position on the topic you are discussing.

Based on your thesis statement, it appears that you are discussing child labor and the rights of a child to both work and have freedom. However, your thesis statement does not clearly present your stance on child labor. To make it stronger and more focused, it is recommended to explicitly state your argument or position.

Here is an example of a revised thesis statement: "I argue that while children may develop various skills through work, governments should prioritize protecting their right to education, play, and a safe childhood by setting appropriate age limits for employment."

Remember, your thesis statement should be arguable, specific, and provide an overarching claim that you can support with evidence throughout your thesis or essay.