Posted by tony on Sunday, April 24, 2011 at 4:51am.
You shifted from "one" to "you" . I would call that ambiguous
Yes, it's ambiguous, but the error is the second one. The pronoun "one" is 3rd person, but the pronoun "you" is 2nd person.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/consistency.htm
Scroll down to Pronoun Reference.
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