Posted by Mike1 on Friday, April 22, 2011 at 3:15pm.
1. was (subject is "kitchen")
2. Overall, we spent out time eating...
3. OK
4. I'd use "wedding" rather than "marriage" -- "wedding" is referring to the ceremony and the party; "marriage" is referring to the union and all the years a couple is in the relationship.
5. comma needed
6. two commas needed
7. keep the articles ("a"); comma needed; private (spelling)
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