Posted by Mike1 on Monday, April 18, 2011 at 4:41pm.
1) Jamal is planning a trip around the world on his motorbike with his friend Simon.
Possible question: Is Jamal travelling alone?
2) They will drive across Europe, and then they will take a plane across the Bering Sea to Alaska.
[The word "then" is not a conjunction; you need "and" there to properly connect those two clauses.]
3)Then they will ride through Canada before finishing their journey back in the USA.
Possible question: Which forms of transportation will they use?
4) All OK.
5) Jamal and Simon also know that they may be miles from civilization. That's why they are taking a back-up team with them.
Possible questions: Which countries are they travelling through?
[The word "places" seems too general. It's better to put "countries" or maybe "cities" in there.]
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