Posted by Mike1 on Sunday, April 17, 2011 at 2:33pm.
1) Sometimes my parents are at work, not at home, so I have to stay at home alone with my brother.
??
2) I felt sorry for my mum because she has a broken leg (better: she broke her leg, she had a broken leg).
I'd say "... because she broke her leg."
3) I finished primary school with an average mark of 9 out of 10.
OK
4) I was proud of myself on 24th July when I passed my driving test.
OK
5) The teacher reprimanded me (= wrote a reprimand in the class register??)
OK, either way you want to write it is fine.
6) It was the last sad moment in my life when my girlfriend broke up with me. While I was climbing a step, I fell down.
If you fall down, "on the floor" is usually assumed -- or "on the field" if you're outdoors, etc.
I don't understand "last sad moment" -- do you mean this? ~~> The last time I felt sad was when my girlfriend broke up with me.
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