Homework Help: ESL English

Posted by Irene E. on Tuesday, April 12, 2011 at 8:39pm.

According to the statistic, people who win money in casinos lose their time to communicate with their "family members and therefore, have bad relationships with their" parents.
There is one grammatical mistake inside the " ". Can someone please tell me what the mistake is?
I really appreciate that ;)

ESL English - Writeacher, Tuesday, April 12, 2011 at 8:54pm
There needs to be a comma before "therefore" as well as after it.

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