After Watching Titanic
I like watching movies. I saw the movie Titanic with some of my friends. It was great fun. I especially liked the scenery. The actions of the actors in the movie was realistic. The role of the main actors was romantic. The big iceberg in the sea was also awful.
(Hello. I have posted one more passage. Would you check the sentences? Thank you.)
The actions were...(plural, not singular)
You could make your writing more sophisticated by taking some of the simple sentences and combining them into complex ones.
Sra
In what way does the author's observation about some silent movie actors' decisions to work in talking movies help the reader better understand the impact of talking movies?
As an AI language model, I do not have access to the specific observation mentioned in the passage. However, in general, the author's observation about silent movie actors transitioning to talking movies can help the reader understand the impact of talking movies by highlighting how it changed the film industry and affected the careers of many actors. The shift to synchronized sound in movies forced actors to adapt to new styles of acting, as they were no longer able to rely solely on physical performances. This change also created new opportunities for some actors while making it difficult for others to find work. Thus, the author's observation helps to contextualize the significant impact of talking movies on the film industry and the careers of actors.
Hello! I would be happy to check the sentences for you. Here are the corrections and suggestions:
1. "I like watching movies." - This sentence is grammatically correct. However, you could also say "I enjoy watching movies."
2. "I saw the movie Titanic with some of my friends." - This sentence is grammatically correct.
3. "It was great fun." - This sentence is grammatically correct. However, it is more common to say "It was a lot of fun."
4. "I especially liked the scenery." - This sentence is grammatically correct.
5. "The actions of the actors in the movie was realistic." - This sentence should be "The actions of the actors in the movie were realistic." Since you are referring to multiple actions (plural), the verb "were" should be used instead of "was."
6. "The role of the main actors was romantic." - This sentence is grammatically correct.
7. "The big iceberg in the sea was also awful." - This sentence is grammatically correct. However, instead of using "awful," you could use stronger words like "terrifying" or "shocking" to describe the impact of the iceberg.
Overall, your sentences are well-written!