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Homework Help: English

Posted by Mike on Thursday, March 31, 2011 at 9:20am.

Can someone check my sentences, please?
It's really urgent. I don't know how to rephrase "bug", "she did te ultimate". Thank you.


1) My mum started bugging with clothes she chose. I didn't say anything at first, I just turned up my nose.
2)I need to rephrase it: My mum made me angry because she wanted to buy me clothes I didn't like. At first I didn't say anything but then I showed my disapproval (?)
3) I often get angry with my mum because I don't want her to buy me clothes (for buying me clothes (?) I don't like.
4) Though I'm still dependent on my parents I don't want them to influence the way I dress. (my clothing style?)
5)My mum did the ultimate when I asked her for Adidas and she bought me Zips: Rephrase: It was the last straw when she wanted to buy me Zips.
6) I'm wearing a pair of white Adidas tennis shoes (or from Adidas?), a colorful wrist band,a blue-and-white half-zip hoodie, tracksuit bottoms and a pair of knee socks.

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