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Homework Help: Writing

Posted by Raven on Thursday, March 24, 2011 at 7:44pm.

Can you fix my writing? My topic is technology hurting kids. Support the side with details.

The World of Technology
Technology, Technology, thatís all we use today. Thereís Facebook, Twitter, Myspace, and so many more. My opinion on technology is that I agree that is very distracting because many kids are failing and falling behind in school and grades.
There are so many reasons I agree with the writer of the Scope magazine article ďIs Technology Messing with Your Brain?Ē One reason is kids are spending more time with their gadgets than with their friends. Another reason is kids are spending more time with their electronics than with their homework. Last reason is kids canít concentrate or remember anything because their brain is multitasking with all of this technology.
To emphasize my point, you should agree that kids using technology is distracting their minds off real stuff that matters. School work should come first and then you could play later. Many parents think Iím probably right and the other parents think Iím wrong. We need to get these intelligent kids cracking into these books, learning.

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